i have decided to rework my narrative so that it is rich enough to convey my ideas as well as tight enough so it no longer seems arbitrary and general.
as she stood there feeling confined and trapped by the monotony of her everyday duties, she becomes distracted and daydreams about her life as a young woman, offering her a momentary escape...
in reworking my narrative i hope to develop a more relevant design.
the main ideas i now wish to convey are
-confinement/being trapped by her reality
-the monotony of her daily life
-the freedom she experiences while daydreaming
-her elevated state of being while daydreaming
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